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You brits are way too polite, you don't need to excuse yourself or say something positive first in orded to critize ;- ) I am interested in your sentence "my original model" ? Is this your model that can be downloaded somewhere ? Alright, my critique: Change mapping to exponential to avoid the burning. Change the white material to slightly gray. There is never perfect white facade, the lightning will make it white, while illuminating the whole scene without burning it like now. I presure it's still Vray Sun and Sky, up the subdivs, atleast to 8-12, default it's 3. Change the size to 2-3 to soften the shadows, they are too strong right now with no softening at the end. Change water color, it shoudn't actually have fog in it. Should be clear and take color from sky and the pool material. Lessen the bump. way too strong.

bro, i always looking forward for your technical advice! i would kiss u if u are a girl. lols =D telling u the truth, there is still a lot of term and minor setting in vray which i had any idea what is it actually for. but yes, still slowly to catch-up. with all the pros help of course. about the pool, i think its because of the angle. already put full refraction in that. but still cant c thru. will try chg the setting that u suggested. thanks a lot! -regards, muck