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Chicago: Mixed-Use Development

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I agree, this is very nice. Like the painterly quality. I have a couple crits if ya fancy. 1. The one aspect that I think could use some help is the lake beyond. Feels a bit like the edge of the world out there. Perhaps a more intense gradient from shallow water to deep might help.. and a little environment haze as it fades off to the end. After looking at it some more.. I think it's just that the horizon ends sharply... maybe just fade that line a bit more. 2. This is personal preference, but I feel like the perspective angle is almost too slight... I would either straighten it out so it's more balanced or swing the camera more to the right to make it more dynamic. It's kind of caught in the middle and reads as a little off balance in my opinion. Is that millenium park back there? Nice work there and thanks for sharing. M-